Saturday, January 30, 2010

This Makes Me Very, Very Happy

I first 'met' Anne Brooke on a writing forum, many many years ago. She was helpful to me, a virtual newbie, and she was friendly and generous with her advice. And I admired her writing (still do). She's good. She's brave, in both what she writes and how she publishes; she's been down the route of traditional publishers and agents and she's one of the few people who've self-published successfully.

And she's my friend. And a trusted reader.

A few months ago she sent me a story of hers to read (she was looking for feedback). I loved it. I thought it was brilliant. I made a few suggestions (the best I could) but really it was a great story and didn't need much work at all.

It's called How To Eat Fruit and it's published on February 1st. Click here for the details.



Anne sent me a PDF of the story this morning.

This is how it begins:

"For Nik Perring, writer and friend: thank you."

which is a huge, huge honour and makes me very, very happy. And proud. And humble.

Thank you, Anne.

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ADDED: And as soon as I posted this, THIS came up on my google alerts. How timely.

Friday, January 29, 2010

Write Words

Really this is a message to my write words friends. I seem to have let my subscription lapse and probably won't be renewing it for a while. But I wouldn't want you thinking I'd just buggered off without saying anything.

So to all my friends there, thanks so much for your help, advice and support over the years. And all the very best with your writing.

Thursday, January 28, 2010

Of All The eBook Readers I've seen

...I think this one, the BeBook Neo, looks the most attractive.

Not that I'm thinking of getting one. Just saying.


My Thoughts On the iPad

Potentially the release of Apple's iPad (as we now know it's called) could have a huge impact on the way books are sold and read. That was the word on the street. So at 6pm last night I tuned in to a live stream and a live blog (- click for pics) of the launch event.

Mostly I was disappointed.

What I was hoping for was a super swanky take, by the super swanky Apple, on the eReader. Maybe that was wishful thinking. That is not what the iPad is. In fact I'm not sure I know exactly what it is. I'm not totally convinced the people at Apple do either. But what it seems to be is, err, a really big and (admittedly) very cool version of the iPod touch. A cool gadget. Excellent screen resolution (for photos and movies) all multi-touch screen and, well, everything else the touch does but bigger, faster and better.

In order to avoid a very long post, here are my problems.

Its size. The iPhone (which I own and love) is a wonderful device. It gives me really handy things from a device which fits in my pocket. I can browse the web from a device that fits in my pocket. I can email, easily and efficiently, from a device that fits in my pocket. The device that fits in my pocket I can use as a phone, play games on, text from, etc etc. And IT FITS IN MY POCKET.

The iPad will not fit in anyone's pocket. So it's no more portable than a laptop or netbook.

The Touch Screen. Yes, this is clever. Yes it looks cool and like something someone might have in Star Trek. But as a device you'd use to type up a story, for example, I can't see how it would work. The keyboard's a touch screen jobby that pops up on the tablet itself (like the iPhone). But that means that you'd be typing where the screen is rather than typing flat and looking at a screen that's perpendicular to a keyboard. I'm thinking back problems, neck strain and, well, just not being comfortable. Apple are offering a keyboard (which is almost the same size as a laptop's) dock but once that's attached I can't see how different it would be to working on a laptop or desktop or netbook. And you'd have to carry it around with you. Hmm.

That it's not an eReader. The ace that the Kindle, Sony Reader et al have in their hand is that they use electronic ink. That means that the screen doesn't look like a computer screen. It isn't backlit. There's no eye strain. You can read it in sunlight. It looks almost exactly like paper and , I must say, having seen it, it's bloody impressive. All the other readers on the market are around about the same size as a paperback, and mostly thinner. This is good. This means I can put it in my pocket. With the iPad the screen (albeit an impressive high resolution one) IS backlit. And the device IS too big to fit in a pocket.

And the last bit's what's disappointed me the most. In conjunction with the iPad's launch, Apple have also announced their new iBooks store (like iTunes but for books). Personally I think they could have made more of this and provided something more (e) reader friendly.

So there are my impressions. I'm sure it'll sell well. I'm sure it'll be competition for the Kindle (btw what I'd like to see is the option to buy eBooks from wherever I like and to read them on whichever device I choose) and I'm sure the fact that its 16G memory is the same as my iPod nano won't hinder it.

I think I was just expecting more. Or something different.

Tuesday, January 26, 2010

The Short Story According To Nik

I am not an expert on short stories. I'm not an expert on anything to be honest. But I am a short story writer, one who's been published in some fairly spiffing places, and one who teaches writing every so often.

It occurred to me earlier that I don't really give any advice here, so this post should change that. It's not comprehensive. Lots will disagree with me, I'm sure. But this is what I think. I hope it helps. And if anyone's got any of their own I'd love to see them - so do leave a comment.


Here are my tips for anyone wanting to write a good short story or piece of flash fiction.

Start where the story starts, not before. If I was telling you about a fantastic hotel room I'd stayed in I wouldn't start by telling you about booking the tickets to get there (unless the story was about booking the tickets and ended in the room).

Take out everything, every word, every sentence, every character that isn't absolutely necessary.

Similarly, only use the right words. Sometimes people do just 'sit'. Or 'run'.

Make sure your characters are believable. What they do, or the situations they find themselves in, may be unlikely and fantastical but the way they react to them has to be something that readers will believe.

Be suspicious of anything you think is clever. The story comes first, the story's what people should notice, not the writer.

Write for you, but spare a thought for the reader too.

Don't overdo it. Big words are fine if they're the right ones. Same with descriptions.

Say what you want to say in the simplest, and most effective, way possible. In other words: get to the point.

Aim to be brilliant.

Don't expect it to be easy. Or quick. Be prepared to work hard.

Don't be afraid of rewriting. In fact, embrace it; it will make your stories better.

Don't expect to get it right the first time. You have total control of what can be changed. (I often find also that if a story wants or needs to be changed, then it'll let you know.)

Trust your instincts. If you suspect something's not working then it probably isn't.

Don't be afraid of putting a story away for a while. Sometimes stories, and your head, need space.

Don't be afraid of failure. Nothing's wasted. It's better to try something new and fail (and perhaps learn something) than to play safe all the time.

Most importantly: BE BRAVE. You have an imagination, use it. Write the story you want to write, write what you think's good and interesting, even if that means not sticking with the norm. Different, if done well, can be brilliant.

And read the greats. See how they do things. See why they're the greats.

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Talking of greats and of advice...

Monday, January 25, 2010

How I Write

I'm over at Teresa Stenson's blog today, talking to her, as part of of her series, about how I write. Click here to read. Must admit, I really enjoyed both thinking about the process and writing about it. Top questions, Teresa. Thank you.

Thursday, January 21, 2010

Interview with The Bristol Short Story Prize






I'm delighted to welcome Joe Melia, the main coordinator of The Bristol Short Story Prize, to the blog for a chat about the prize and short stories. What a treat. Enjoy!







Welcome to the blog, Joe. So, tell us about The Bristol Short Story Prize.
Many thanks the invite, it’s a real pleasure to be here. The BSSP is an annual international short story competition that publishes an anthology of 20 previously unpublished stories and awards cash prizes to the 20 authors featured in the anthology. We’re in our 3rd year. We’re based in Bristol, hence the name, and try to involve lots of different facets of the city in what we do: for instance, the photos on our website are taken by a couple of photography students from Filton College, we invite journalism students at Bath Spa university to do interviews for our site and we invite designs for our anthology covers from final year illustration students at University of the West of England. These initiatives all take place annually.

How and why did it start?
The BSSP was founded by the editors of Bristol Review of Books magazine in 2007.  The magazine is a free quarterly that has features on the local arts and culture scene as well as lots of book reviews. The mag. has always published poetry and the idea for the short story competition came from the desire to support and publish new and exciting short stories and also to raise some money for the magazine to ensure it remained a free publication rather than filling it with advertising. The winning story in the BSSP also gets published in the magazine. The central idea from the start remains - to publish great short stories and reward the writers.

What do you look for when you select the judges? (Click to see this year's.)
We’ve been very lucky with the judges we have approached so far, they have nearly all said ‘yes please’ straight away. Up to now we have stuck with the Bristol theme in selection- everyone on the judging panels we have selected has a strong connection with the city, this may well change in future years. The most important thing for us is that the judges have enthusiasm for the project and the short story in particular. Our chair Bertel Martin is one of the editors of Bristol Review of Books and heavily involved in the setting up and direction that BSSP takes, he also, writes, publishes and performs which brings an awful lot to the compiling of the shortlist. As well as Bertel, we have a couple of people who have some standing in the publishing/book industry, something we look to feature every year. We’re very lucky to have Maia Bristol (yes, that is her name!) UK sales manager at Faber & Faber and a big short story and new writing fan, and also Bristol publisher Helen Hart who has worked previously for Harpercollins- this kind of experience is invaluable in the judging process. We look for people who bring other things to the process, too: Joe Berger tells stories in many ways as a cartoonist, children’s writer and animator and he will bring a unique angle to the judging process. It was a great day for the city when Tania Hershman moved here last summer, as well as being a superb writer her enthusiasm for the world of short fiction (although she doesn’t like that term much!) is such an inspiration. I was reading ‘Go Away’ from her fantastic debut collection ‘The White Road and other stories’ for about the fiftieth time when she revealed on her blog that she was moving here- let the bells ring out, I thought!

What do you think of the state of the short story in the UK at the moment?
There are so many exciting things happening that it’s difficult to get to sleep at night thinking about future possibilities! Just off the top of my head, if you go outside the major publishers, some of whom consistently publish great collections- Atlantic, Faber etc. look at what Roast Books are doing, for instance- phenomenal stuff. ‘A-Z of Possible Worlds’ is one of the most courageous, groundbreaking acts of publishing it’s possible to imagine, it’s also a wonderful collection. And Comma Press, Salt Publishing- we look on in awe at what these guys are doing. Then there’s Short Fuse , Story Slam Live, Pulp.net short story cafe, Word Soup, Year Zero Writers live projects- such an active scene. And look at that list of magazines Tania put together the other day and the latest prizes to appear- Manchester and the Sunday Times (I think!), £25,000 first prize.

Here’s a scoop for you, Nik. We’ve been developing something for the last 18 months which will be piloted this year on a small scale and then, hopefully, if we get the funding, will be up and running in a big way for our 2011 Prize. In the next month or so Henbury school in Bristol will choose a story from our previous anthologies and a year 10 art class will produce pictures/images, in response to the story. The author of the story will visit the school to chat to the children about their writing, short stories, their story etc. and the pictures/images/works will be displayed in a gallery at the Arnolfini arts centre in Bristol during the day of our awards ceremony in July. Next year, we’ll open it out to 5 or 6 schools, who will all work on different stories and on different types of adaptations- drama, film, music, dance whatever they choose to do. These performances/exhibitions will be a major part of a day-long short story jamboree culminating in our awards ceremony in the evening. We’ve got lots of other stuff planned including a short story dj. It will be a big fiesta celebrating the vibrant and dynamic world of the short story and with it we hope to be contributing in our own small way to all the exciting things mentioned earlier. This has turned out to be a very long answer-sorry! Long term we hope to expand this to a weekend and then a few days but it’s early days and we don’t want to get too far ahead of ourselves.

Can you tell us a little about the prize’s anthologies?
They’re full of variety and different styles and great writing. There’s some historical fiction in there, humour, verse, stories that score highly on the quirkometre- some from experienced writers and some from those just starting out. One of the joys of the competition is finding out about the authors of the stories. All the stories are read anonymously and you always have a picture of the author when you read a story and quite often it turns out to be wrong, particularly the gender of the writer, get caught out by that a lot. And interestingly, knowing about the author can really alter the reading experience a great deal.

What, in your opinion, makes a short story great?
A really difficult question because there are so many different kinds of short story and different aspects of a short story that I really like and that are very effective. I do enjoy stories that really go to town on inviting the reader to ‘come to the aid’ of the writer, as Harold Bloom puts it, because it highlights one of the distinctive aspects of the short story ie the reader is often much more involved than in say, lots of novels, for instance.

Take Hemingway’s legendary six worder ‘For sale: baby shoes, never worn’ – it’s entirely up to the reader to fill in the gaps. Is this an unbearable tragedy with a baby dying or given up for adoption , or a domestic dispute over the colour of the shoes, is the baby alive and well but with unusually large feet, have the shoes been stolen and subsequently turn out to be extremely sought-after with a high market value, have they been sent to the wrong address and the occupants happen to be desperate for money? The possibilities are endless.

But I also think that great short stories have numerous other qualities-they leave an indelible mark, make you gasp, make you want to read them again and again, create an entirely convincing universe within a few lines, describe an episode or encounter or moment of realisation that not only effects some kind of change or eureka moment in a character but also the reader.

What do you think the future holds for the short form?
Nothing but brightness!  Short stories are one of the most basic and common forms of human interaction. Think about how many times stories are told- meeting someone in the street,  arriving at work,  having a haircut, visiting friends/family, a lengthy evening at the public house, a phone conversation. All of these occasions and more are full of stories. How are you? Did you have a nice weekend? How was your holiday? Did you hear about…? Wassup? – these prompts are everywhere, every second of every day all over the world and nearly always lead to a short story of some kind. I’d love a clever clogs somewhere to estimate the number of short stories that are related worldwide in a 24hr period – how many millions of pieces of short fiction would that be??

Also, having 2 small children makes you realise that short stories dominate pre-school reading- there are so many examples of Joycean epiphanies and Chekhov’s ‘note of interrogation’, it’s astounding-.The climax to ‘I’ll Show You, Blue Kangaroo?’ is a great example of the elusive Chekhov ending.  Short stories are everywhere and will continue to be. So the idea that gets banged around in some circles that no one wants to read or write them or buy books of them and that the short story is something that needs ‘saving’ is way beyond outright absurdamundo that it deserves no more airtime from this day forward. As Douglas Coupland says in his latest novel Generation A : ‘Without stories, our universe is merely rocks and clouds and lava and blackness. It's a village scraped raw by warm waters leaving not a trace of what existed before.’

What would you say about flash fiction and short, short stories?
A great form and really powerful. They are unbeatable at delivering sensational knock-out blows- Lydia Davis is excellent at the art, for instance.  I’m still reeling from having read ‘Fear’ a week or so ago- it contains about 100 words and has a strength , intensity and resonance that defies belief. This is what flash fiction can do.

Do you think there’s anything more us short story writers (and readers) could and should be doing?
Just keep writing and reading stories. And write what you want, really want. Not what you think other people will want to read or something you think might be like another writer- just write your truth and stick to it. It’s wonderful the way in which writers support and encourage each other- it really is an act of courage writing something and letting other people see it. I have nothing but the utmost admiration for writers.

As a short story lover yourself, which five collections would you say are required reading?
Required reading is a tricky one. This is Earth’s toughest question!
If I may, perhaps I’ll give you 5 collections that immediately shivered my timbers and I return to ever such a lot (there are a lot more than 5):
-          The Lady with the Little Dog and other stories’ Anton Chekhov
-          Drinking Coffee Elsewhere and other stories’ ZZ Packer
-          Burned Children of America’ ed. Zadie Smith
-          My Oedipus Complex and other stories’ Frank O’Connor
-          Not Her Real Name’ Emily Perkins
It would be a different 5 tomorrow and again the next day. Just thought of loads of others

Anything you’d like to add?
I’m looking forward to reading collections by these people very soon: Padrika Tarrant, Laura Van Den Berg, Sarah Salway, Gwendoline Riley, Panos Karnezis, about a zillion others and reading everything Lydia Davis has ever written.
Thanks once again for your kind invite, Nik.


Wednesday, January 20, 2010

2081

And while I'm thinking about Kurt Vonnegut - how amazing does this short film (based on his awesome short story Harrison Bergeron) look? Can't wait to see it. Seriously.

(I first read the story in his collection, Welcome to The Monkey House - which is brilliant.)

Incidentally, if you google the story's title there's a PDF of the story on the results page just below the video results.



2081 Trailer from 2081 on Vimeo.

Listen

Mid way through last year I started working on a story. It had a definite style, a definite voice which was different, a kind of extension, of how I'd been writing before. And I liked it, it was good. But I stopped. I got stuck. Couldn't figure out where to go and went on to other things.

One of the reasons I stopped was because I was worried that the style was not my own. Honestly I thought I'd been too heavily influenced by reading Kurt Vonnegut. And me being me, well - I want what I write to be me, to come from inside.

But yesterday: a revelation.

I was working on an old laptop and I opened a story I'd written AGES ago.

And it was written in exactly the same style as the thing I'd given up on. The first piece had been written a year or so before I'd read a Kurt Vonnegut book. The more recent piece had been written before I'd read a Kurt Vonnegut book too, I discovered. I hadn't nicked his style. It was my own.

You have no idea how happy that makes me. And free.

Now, if I could write something at least half as good as the master...

Tuesday, January 19, 2010

From Rotten Things To The Awesome

Tania Hershman has compiled a list of every lit zine in the UK and Ireland. And she has shared it. Hugely generous. The things she does for short stories, eh? And the things she does for us!

Thank you, Tania.


(And I'm thrilled to be taking about something positive here after my previous post.)

This Blog Post Has Probably Been A Long Time Coming

And no, it, surprisingly perhaps, has nothing to do with my ex. Or her mum. Maybe that's one for another time.

For a fair old while now I've been wondering how best to blog about this. Basically, and to cut a very long story short, there was a writing community. A group of writers who were friends. Who shared their work with each other for feedback. One of those friends, it turned out, was using (abusing) his friendship by stealing the ideas of his friends and passing them off as his own. Much has been said about this. Here, for example. It even spawned an anti-plagiarism day to which many, many people contributed. Including me.

And as I said at the time: theft is wrong and whoever does it should be ashamed. And one of the most important bits about being a writer is the ability to MAKE STUFF UP. Which is different to taking other people's stories. Very different.

The writer in question has defended himself (I've linked to what he's said below). He's said that what he's done is legitimate because he's an artiste (don't you know) and that all art is shared. And to a point, yes it is - every artist learns from who's gone before them and what they've produced. People are influenced. I know I've said a good, good many times how much reading the utterly splendid Aimee Bender and Etgar Keret's work has shaped me as a writer. And Carver. And Mary Miller. And Alice Munro. And Kurt Vonnegut. And Sarah Salway. And Michael Czyzniejewski. And Caroline Smailes. And Roy Kesey. And Sebastian Beaumont and F Scott Fitzgerald. And... okay, you're getting bored. I understand.

The keyword here is: INFLUENCED. Not: I'LL WRITE, I'LL DO THE WORK AND YOU CAN TAKE THE CREDIT (without even telling me!!!).

The whole thing upset me. That a guy, a friend, could do that, upset me (most writers I know are brilliant and lovely and morally sound). A lot. God, that he did it was bad enough. And not apologise. And not admit to what he'd done. Even now he refuses to put a piece of his (which he nicked) up online (it won a comp and was taken down and withdrawn once the comp organisers realised what had happened) so people could see the actual evidence and make their own minds up.

What he has been doing, especially of late, is blogging (and commenting on his own posts and apparently replying to them) about the whole thing. Trying to justify why he did what he did. And trying to suggest that the people who objected (he calls one a 'mad woman' - I call her his former friend who trusted him who he stole work from and who's pissed off about it) are stupid and don't understand the artistic process. He's talking bullshit of course. (All this after he's commented here, on my blog, under a variety of different names, I should say.)

As I said, I've been wondering how best to blog about this for some time.

And then I got this email, which I think sums things up perfectly. And I had to post it now, even though it's late. And no, it's probably not from who you might think it's from . But it IS right.

Stealing's wrong. Stealing from friends is even worse.

(You can read Douglas Bruton's nonsense here.)

It says (the sensible email, that is....):



The creative process, for most of us, has absolutely NOTHING to do with taking whole stories or part-stories from unsuspecting and trusting colleagues in writing groups, and using their creations for our own gain.

For most writers, this is utterly unacceptable behaviour. It is not the taking of legitimate inspiration. It is done behind people's backs, without permission, abusing trust. It is theft. Underhand and mean-spirited, fuelled by both jealousy and greed.

There are NO articles endorsing the taking of work from friends without permission. Unless they are written by Douglas Bruton.

It is deeply cynical that Bruton repeatedly seeks to join groups of unsuspecting writers, without warning them of his weird creative habits. We'd like to suggest that he seeks the company of like-minded writers, who don't mind their hard work being taken by colleagues, without asking, without thanks, without credit.




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So that's all I've got to say on the subject - I'm glad the above emailer said it so well (better than me). I imagine there'll be a can of worms opened up. And I imagine there'll be a few comments here from people (or names, let's be honest!) I'm not familiar with. But it needed saying, this. And it's been said.

Folks, be nice to your friends. Don't steal from them. It's rubbish.

Saturday, January 16, 2010

A Splendid Second Megan Taylor Interview


I'm delighted to be able to welcome the fabulous Megan Taylor back to my blog. In October Megan was here, chatting to me about her first book, How We Were Lost and other writing bits. Today she's here to tell me about her second novel, The Dawning.






Welcome back, Megan. So, The Dawning, your second book is about to be published. Could you tell us a little about it?
I’m generally interested in (/nosy about) family dynamics, particularly when under stress, and with ‘The Dawning’, I wanted to create a story full of suspense and (hopefully) page-turning drama, which also dipped below the surface of my characters.  I wanted to explore the threats arising from within, as well as from outside, one troubled family.
My writing is often obsessed with our secret selves - the private anxieties and memories that we all carry, but rarely share, that nonetheless fundamentally shape who we really are.  Caught in a crisis situation, I’m as interested in how a character responds internally as I am in their actions.  There’s also often a strange kind of beauty there - perhaps our secret selves burn brightest against the dark.

Describe The Dawning in no more than ten words.
A family reaches breaking point during one unforgettable, midwinter night.

How different did you find the experience of writing a second novel to the first?
It was very different.  ‘How We Were Lost’ was written in precious, snatched moments (mostly in the hour each morning when my daughter was at nursery).  I stumbled along, but it was fun.
I felt a little more pressure when it came to ‘The Dawning’, but I was able to take more time as I worked on it while studying for a Creative Writing MA.  This also meant that it was subject to feedback right from the start.  I’m very grateful to my tutors and classmates at Manchester Metropolitan University for all their help and support.

How do the two books compare?
Although both are dark, suspenseful family dramas, I made a conscious decision to move away from a first person point of view with ‘The Dawning’.  I wanted the challenge of juggling multiple characters and situations without losing a sense of intimacy.  ‘The Dawning’ has a very distinct timeframe too – the whole novel is set over a single night, and it also perhaps plays more obviously with thriller elements.

The Dawning is set in a Peak District town. Two questions in one:  why did you choose that location, and which town (I live reasonably close to the Peak District and I’m nosy)?
I moved from London to Nottingham six years ago.  Before then, I’d never visited the Peak District.  It has been an almost life-changing discovery and we’re there as often as we can be these days.  The first ideas and images behind ‘The Dawning’ came tumbling at me all at once one dreamy evening following a country walk.
I haven’t named which small Peak District town I’ve borrowed for ‘The Dawning’.  Perhaps it’s an amalgamation.  Perhaps it’s the place you imagine it to be. 


The book’s published on January 23rd – are you doing any readings or signings we could come to?
I’m reading at Nottingham Writers Studio on 21st January, but this is open to NWS members only.  Hopefully there will be further readings too.  Keep an eye on my blog or website to find out more …

What’s the best bit about being an author?
Apologies in advance for any cheesiness, but there really are tons of best bits.  Connecting with readers who understand what you’re trying to say, and then take you even further with their responses.  That moment when you first hold your published book, or see it on a bookshop shelf.  The writing itself, of course – the fascinating and fabulous places it transports you to.

And the worst?
Absolutely nothing (especially right now).  I’ve wanted to be an author since childhood.  I am a very lucky girl.

If you could recommend one book to me, which would it be? (Mine would be Willful Creatures by Aimee Bender.)
For me, this changes all the time.  Over the last year, I’ve been trying to catch up with modern classics I’ve always meant to read and somehow never got around to.  Last summer, I read Kesey’s ‘One Flew Over the Cuckoo’s Nest’ for the first time – it blew me away.  I’ve also just finished Carver’s ‘Cathedral’ – amazing!  His short story ‘Fever’ especially utterly undid me (but in a very fine way).
Sorry -  that’s two already and I’ve only just started thinking about it!

Anything you’d like to add?
An enormous thank you Nik – it’s very lovely to be visiting again.



Friday, January 15, 2010

You Never Quite Know

The cool and/or difficult bit about writing is that, at the time of writing, you never quite know whether what you've written is any good or not (though you can usually tell when it's crap). That's the thing you usually find out after editing and/or after coming back to it after a few days or longer. And that's what I've been doing - I've been looking at the things I'd written around December and, after throwing a few bits into my 'Dead Story' folder, and tinkering with the ones that survived (and including one of the things I wrote yesterday), I've half a dozen very short stories I'm pleased with. Which is fab and a little surprising.

I think the point I'm struggling to make is: When you're a writer there's no need to rush. Stories keep. And they can be improved, even rescued, long after they've been written.

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And now I need to eat. It has been a long, long week. But a good one, all told.

Thursday, January 14, 2010

Tidying Up

I've spent a fair amount of time over these past couple of days tidying up my blog and website. I'm not sure you'd notice straight away but for the curious...

My website now has its own short story page, where a good number of my stories that have been published online can be read. That's meant I've been able to remove a few from the right hand sidebar, so the blog looks a little tidier.

I've also added an interviews page to my website - again meaning I can remove some of the links to the right so the blog doesn't look quite so ragged and straggly. (I did this randomly by the way - so if you're interview's not there, sorry, but it wasn't because I didn't like what you had to say. Actually, that's a very good point - I don't think I've been unhappy with any of my interviews, which says an awful lot about those I've interviewed.)

Err, so there.

I hope you like what I've done - if you don't, let me know!

Tuesday, January 12, 2010

I Like To Write, I Don't Like To Write

I've just spent a good while doing this exercise from the great, lovely and super-talented Sarah Salway (you know how much I love her work).

To paraphrase you spend ten minutes writing I like to write..., and I don't like to write... and it's had some interesting results.

A theme which occurred in different guises regularly was that I DIDN'T like writing what other people are writing. I like writing different.

But I have two favourites.

I like to write things that make people go: Eh? wtf?, but then, aaahhhh!!

And

I like to write believable, even if it isn't.

Anyone else going to have a go? I'd love to know your results.

Monday, January 11, 2010

Ink

For anyone who wondered exactly what brown ink looks like. More red really, isn't it? So now you know.


Sunday, January 10, 2010

Two More Questions and Two More Answers

First question's from Rachel Fenton, who says:

do you sit down to write a story, no matter what or do you wait for a story to come to you and then sit down to it?

Good question. I like to think I'm disciplined. I'm in the office, at my writing desk, pretty much seven days a week (that's probably because I have no life). And most days I will be writing. But the key thing to remember, I think, is that I'm not constantly coming up with new stories or ideas; a helluva lot of time is spent working on current stories, aiming to make good ideas into good stories. If that makes sense.

I'm not sure about forcing things. I think that often once pen's put to paper I can find something to write about, and sometimes that something turns out to be okay. But if there's nothing there then there's not much point. There are always other things I can be doing (admin, procrastination, reading, blogging, scratching my head...).

I like what Chuck Palahniuk said on the matter.









And question number two, from Tomlit's Alex.

What tool do you most like writing with?

Easy. (And this'll be discussed in greater detail at Teresa's blog later in the month.)

My favourite writing tool is my Pelikan fountain pen. It has brown ink inside it and that brown ink goes into an unlined Moleskine notebook.

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As before, if there's anything anyone would like to ask, drop me a comment.

A Couple Of Questions Answered

So, the other day I asked if there was anything anyone would like to know.

The lovely and talented Sarah Hilary said:

Can you tell us a little about your writing plans for 2010, and maybe a top tip or two for subbing stories, as you've published in top venues like Smokelong? Thanks!

Writing plans are pretty much the same as ever. I want to write well. I want to write good stuff. I want to be published by good places. And I want people to enjoy my work. I have a nagging feeling that I want to write something longer, not novel length, but something that'll be longer than the short stories I've been writing over this past few months. But stories are as long as they are so I'll just have to see. I'd also like to enter more competitions. I think I've only ever entered three (short listed in one), so that's a doable goal.

As far as subbing goes, I don't think I do anything any differently to most other writers out there. I think the most important part of subbing anywhere comes before the subbing: it's writing something good. Once I've got something I'm happy with I'll have a look and see if I can find somewhere suitable. Then I simply follow the guidelines, cross my fingers and hope for the best.

And the very lovely and also talented Annie Clarkson said: I would like you to talk about how your own experiences inspire your fiction or not. Or how your fiction might have inspired your real life....

Err, good question. I don't think I've ever been in a situation where something's happened and I've thought: Ooh I must write about that. Mostly, I just make stuff up. I think I'm a definite what if? writer. Actually I think that if I ever do experience something and want to write about it it'll end up here on the blog.

And how does my fiction inspire my life? I'm not too sure that it does. I try, when I can, to keep the two things separate though I'm sure that, in some way, they both influence each other.

There. That was fun. If anyone else has anything they'd like to ask then do leave a comment. I always aim to please.

Saturday, January 09, 2010

What Do You Want From Me?

Just wondered if there was anything anyone wanted me to talk about on here.

If there's anything you'd like to know or anything you'd like to ask then leave a comment and I'll see what I can do.

Thursday, January 07, 2010

Kate Forsyth Interview

Well it's been a little while since I last interviewed someone here. All that changes today as I welcome international best selling author (of children's and adult's books) Kate Forsyth to the blog, to talk about her latest novel, The Puzzle Ring and curses, amongst other things...


Welcome to the blog, Kate. So, to start us off, your new book, The Puzzle Ring – who’s it for and what’s it about?

‘The Puzzle Ring’ is an historical fantasy for children aged 10+. It tells the story of a girl who discovers that her family was cursed long ago, and the only way to break the curse is to find and fix a broken puzzle ring. To do this, she must travel back in time to the last tumultuous days of Mary, Queen of Scots … a time when witches were burnt and queens were betrayed and the dark forces of wild magic still stalked the land … Essentially its a time travel adventure, with lots of fascinating stuff about Scottish history and fairy lore and curses in it. It was huge fun to write!

You spent a month in Scotland, I hear, to research myths and lore – what was that like?

It was one of the most amazing experiences of my life. I’d longed to go to Scotland all of my life, having been brought up on the stories of my grandmother and great-aunts, who had been brought up on the stories of their grandmother, Ellen Mackenzie, who left Scotland in 1840 at the age of 14. Her story is as tragic and romantic as any old family story, and basically the story of Hannah – who finds herself heir to a mysterious old castle in Scotland – grew directly out of that family history.

My husband says I set ‘The Puzzle Ring’ in Scotland just so I could finally go there – and there’s some truth in that. I think its really important for writers to go where they set their books – and so I packed up my whole family (one husband, three kiddies) and took them to Scotland.

Nothing was strange to me. I felt like I was coming home. As we drove around that wild, lonely, beautiful country, I told my children all the stories that I had been told as a child, and found my voice falling into the same soft lilt of my grandmother and great-aunts.

We stayed in a real 14th century castle near Gatehouse of Fleet, a place where John Knox himself had once stayed, then had four nights in a cottage on the shores of Loch Lomond, in the grounds of Arden House, a grand old Scottish baronial mansion which helped me imagine what Wintersloe Castle might have looked like.

We drove to all the places that appear in the book – the fairy mountain Schiehallion; the whirlpool known as the Hag’s Washtub; and the village of Fortingall where a five-thousand-year-old yew tree grows. We travelled over the Rannoch Moor to Glencoe, a place that looks as if it has not changed in a thousand years, and along the sea road to the Isle of Skye, where we occasionally saw the most extraordinary mountain crags looming out of the mist and rain.

Three days staying in an old monastery on the shores of Loch Ness was definitely a highlight of the trip, particularly as the rain cleared and we had some beautiful warm, spring sunshine. We went monster-hunting, and ate some great Scottish cuisine in the local pubs, and then headed to Edinburgh for a few more days.

I loved Edinburgh! I think it’s one of my favourite cities in the world. One of the highlights was the Beltane celebrations on Calton Hill. We listened to a wonderful Scottish storyteller who told us that Calton Hill was once believed to be a gateway to fairyland. This solved a massive problem I had with the plot of ‘The Puzzle Ring’ and so it turned into one of the best nights we had in Scotland (though we still cannot get over all the mad Celts with their bare arms and bare legs in the freezing cold of a Scottish spring evening.)

When I came home to Sydney, I found my fingertips could not fly over the keyboard fast enough. The oral history of my own family, the fairy tales and folklore of my great-aunt’s bookshelves, the Scottish history I had devoured as a child, all wove itself seamlessly into the book, keeping me as enthralled as any of my grandmother’s stories. And of course, I dedicated the novel to Nonnie and my great-aunts, women of the Mackenzie clan, who first told me the grand and tragic stories of Scotland.

You also spent some time researching curses, do you believe in them now?

One of the first triggers for the book was discovering an amazing old hardback called ‘The Book of Curses’ in a second-hand bookshop in Rye, just at the very moment when I was first thinking about ‘The Puzzle Ring’ and wondering about why Hannah must find the broken ring. When I found the book, it fell open at a story about the Seaforth Doom, a very famous Scottish curse laid upon the Mackenzie clan (my own clan!) I was instantly fascinated.

And one of the reasons why I was so fascinated is that when I was 9 years old I laid a curse upon the biggest, meanest girl at school, a bully-girl called Brenda. She used to pin my plaits to the back of my chair, give me Chinese burns, and mock my stammer. One day I told her I’d curse her if she was ever mean to me again, and in response she pinched me and called me a crybaby. So I went home and pricked my fingers and, with my own blood, I wrote her name on a piece of paper, and burnt the paper over a candle, chanting something along the lines of ‘I curse thee, I curse thee, I curse thee.’

The next day she fell down the stairs and broke her leg. I have never doubted the power of curses since.

Did anything surprise you in writing The Puzzle Ring?

It’s impossible to write a novel and not be surprised by the mysterious synchronicities and serendipities of life. Sometimes I surprise myself, what’s in that bog of the imagination. Sometimes it’s being in need, stuck and afraid, and reaching out a hand and finding just what you need, right then. (Finding ‘The Book of Curses’ is a perfect example of this). And sometimes its realising something in the book that seemed to be there the whole time and you just discover it, as if it was always there and you were just too foolish to see it before. It’s one of the reasons I love writing novels so much.

How does The Puzzle Ring compare with your other books?

Interesting question! ‘The Puzzle Ring’ draws upon the same wellspring of ideas as many of my other books – history, in particular Scottish history; fairy lore, in particular Scottish fairy lore; paganism and Wicca; theories of time travel (I’ve written other books that involve trips back in time); a fascination with jewellery, herbs and flowers, food, art, music, animals; a red-haired heroine (why do so many of my heroines have red hair?); an emphasis on the importance of human relationships and connectedness; and of course it has a happy ending.

How is it different? It is set in contemporary times for much of its story, unlike most of my books, and I draw upon my own passion for soul music, something I’ve never done before.

Stylistically, I think it feels the same as my other books. My books are usually thick and intricate and complex, with unexpected twists and turns, and filled with songs and charms and spells and chants, which is I think my natural love for poetry and song finding an outlet.

You write for adults as well as younger people – are the two processes vastly different?

Not at all. I always know when I start a book who my audience is. I believe strongly that each story has its own natural shape, its own structure and rhythm, and knowing who I am writing for is one way I find that shape and rhythm. Chapter length, sentence construction, word choice – all are linked to that shape – and I find it a very natural, intuitive process discovering it. If I ever do start going astray, it helps me to visualise who is reading it – usually myself at a different age, or my own children and nephews and nieces – and then I know if I am growing too dark, too scary, too sexy, too sophisticated. Ideally, I like to write two or three books for children, and then two or three for adults – its a pattern that seems to suit me.


Talking of the writing process, what’s yours?

First, I daydream a story to life. An idea comes to me – for example, I first thought of writing a book about a quest to find and restore a broken puzzle ring after reading an article about the history of puzzle rings (they were first invented by an Arabian king who was so jealous of his young and beautiful wife that he wanted to devise a way to know if she ever took her wedding ring off her finger). This seemed to me a perfect narrative stratagem – someone, somewhere, wanted to fix a puzzle ring that had been broken. I begin to wonder and ask myself questions. Who? Why? Where? I scribble notes, and when I have more than a page of them I start a new notebook. I have quite a few of them for different ideas – more novels than I could ever write.

I usually begin by assembling a cast of characters, and by writing down a list of possible adventures ie objectives to be achieved, obstacles to be overcome, lessons to be learnt. By the time I’m doing plot points, my brain’s on fire with ideas. Just last night I was up at 1pm, scribbling down possible scenes for the book I’m writing now, and didn’t get to sleep till 3am. This, unfortunately, happens a lot.

Then I begin to write. I always like to begin at the point of change, and then I will write my way steadily through the story, from beginning to middle to end. I edit & polis as I go, and often will have a week or two fixing up what I’ve already written before I can move onwards again. Once I have finished my first draft, I edit very cruelly, and rewrite a lot, and solve lots of problems, and then I send it to my agent and editors, ready to begin the next stage of the story emerging from its chrysalis.


Where did it all begin?

I wrote my first poem at 4, my first story at 5, and my first novel at 7. I have never stopped since. I think I was born knowing I was destined to be a writer (or at least, wanting it very badly)


If you weren’t a writer, you’d be...

Very unhappy.


What’s the best piece of writing advice you’ve been given?

Be brave.


What should all writers do?

Read a lot, write a lot, and don’t be afraid to cut. Cruelly.


What advice would you give to someone wanting to be published?

Wait until you have something you are really sure of, really proud of. Be patient. It takes time to learn the craft

What’s next for you?

I’ve just finished a YA heroic fantasy called ‘The Wildkin’s Curse’ which is being published in Australia in May, and I’m now starting its sequel, tentatively called ‘The Sword of the Storm King’. Then I plan to write a historical fantasy for adults called ‘Bitter Greens’, retelling the tale of Rapunzel.

Anything you’d like to add?

Thank you so much for having me!




Kate Forsyth is the internationally bestselling author of numerous books for children and adults, including The Gypsy Crown, The Starthorn Tree, Dragon Gold and Sea-Magic.

The Gypsy Crown is the first in ‘The Chain of Charms’ series, an historical adventure story which follows the perilous adventures of two Romany children in the time of Oliver Cromwell. In 2007, Kate became the first author to win five Aurealis awards in a single year when Books 2-6 in the series were jointly awarded the 2007 Aurealis Award for Children’s Fiction. Book 5: The Lightning Bolt was also named a Notable Book for 2007 by the Children’s Book Council of Australia. Kate lives by the sea in Sydney, Australia, with her husband and three children, a slinky black cat, a lion-hunting hound, and many thousands of books.


Click here to buy The Puzzle Ring

Wednesday, January 06, 2010

Something Different

Well that was a pleasant change. Just been interviewed about eBooks which was cool because it made me think about them again. To be honest I think pretty much the same as I did before: that they're a great idea with tons of potential, that they can exist alongside actual, physical books, but they need to be cheaper, the electronic readers need to be cheaper and the titles should be available in a format that one can download from any retailer and onto whichever reading device they own.

Of course I'm paraphrasing. What I mean is, they should be more like MP3s and MP3 players.

I will let you know if/when the interview goes to print.

But in the meantime I'd love to know what you all think...

Monday, January 04, 2010

Kreativ


Oh now. The very lovely Jo Cooper has nominated me for a Kreativ Blogger Award, which is a lovely way to start the year. Honestly, it does mean a lot that people enjoy my little corner of the internet.

So I have to...

1. Thank the person who nominated you for this award.
2. Copy the logo and place it on your blog.
3. Link to the person who nominated you for this award.
4. Name 7 things about yourself that people might find interesting.
5. Nominate 7 Kreativ Bloggers.
6. Post links to the 7 blogs you nominate.
7. Leave a comment on each of the blogs letting them know they have been nominated.



Thank you Jo.
Done it.
Likewise.
Seven things, huh? Well, in addition to the seven here, and the seven here...

1. This snow, as pretty as it is, is starting to get on my nerves (I keep slipping on it).
2. I shaved on xmas day, which was the first time I'd seen my face since 2006. I think it's a look I'll stick with, despite having acquired a rather fat neck.
3. I want a cat. Or six. Not right now, but at some point.
4. I worry too much.
5. Like Jo, and for the same reason, I haven't eaten chocolate in years. Or cheese.
6. I have never been to university, a creative writing workshop or a retreat, which occasionally makes me feel I'm a bit of a hypocrite when I teach.
7. I am going to go for a walk.

I'm not going to nominate any bloggers to do this (I've already nominated 14 from the last two times).

I will say that the small art of words is a place I love though.

Saturday, January 02, 2010

Well, It's Here

Happy new year folks. Happy new decade. Bit snowy, isn't it?

I've had a reasonable time over the hols. Seen some people I wanted to see, not seen some people I'd wanted to see and seen someone I didn't want to see. And I've taken some time off. And had a cold and a shave and I even got a little writing done. Mostly it's been cool.

And that's about it really. I think I just wanted to say hello.

More soon...