Saturday, January 30, 2010
This Makes Me Very, Very Happy
And she's my friend. And a trusted reader.
A few months ago she sent me a story of hers to read (she was looking for feedback). I loved it. I thought it was brilliant. I made a few suggestions (the best I could) but really it was a great story and didn't need much work at all.
It's called How To Eat Fruit and it's published on February 1st. Click here for the details.
Anne sent me a PDF of the story this morning.
This is how it begins:
"For Nik Perring, writer and friend: thank you."
which is a huge, huge honour and makes me very, very happy. And proud. And humble.
Thank you, Anne.
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ADDED: And as soon as I posted this, THIS came up on my google alerts. How timely.
Friday, January 29, 2010
Write Words
So to all my friends there, thanks so much for your help, advice and support over the years. And all the very best with your writing.
Thursday, January 28, 2010
Of All The eBook Readers I've seen
Not that I'm thinking of getting one. Just saying.
My Thoughts On the iPad
Mostly I was disappointed.
What I was hoping for was a super swanky take, by the super swanky Apple, on the eReader. Maybe that was wishful thinking. That is not what the iPad is. In fact I'm not sure I know exactly what it is. I'm not totally convinced the people at Apple do either. But what it seems to be is, err, a really big and (admittedly) very cool version of the iPod touch. A cool gadget. Excellent screen resolution (for photos and movies) all multi-touch screen and, well, everything else the touch does but bigger, faster and better.
In order to avoid a very long post, here are my problems.
Its size. The iPhone (which I own and love) is a wonderful device. It gives me really handy things from a device which fits in my pocket. I can browse the web from a device that fits in my pocket. I can email, easily and efficiently, from a device that fits in my pocket. The device that fits in my pocket I can use as a phone, play games on, text from, etc etc. And IT FITS IN MY POCKET.
The iPad will not fit in anyone's pocket. So it's no more portable than a laptop or netbook.
The Touch Screen. Yes, this is clever. Yes it looks cool and like something someone might have in Star Trek. But as a device you'd use to type up a story, for example, I can't see how it would work. The keyboard's a touch screen jobby that pops up on the tablet itself (like the iPhone). But that means that you'd be typing where the screen is rather than typing flat and looking at a screen that's perpendicular to a keyboard. I'm thinking back problems, neck strain and, well, just not being comfortable. Apple are offering a keyboard (which is almost the same size as a laptop's) dock but once that's attached I can't see how different it would be to working on a laptop or desktop or netbook. And you'd have to carry it around with you. Hmm.
That it's not an eReader. The ace that the Kindle, Sony Reader et al have in their hand is that they use electronic ink. That means that the screen doesn't look like a computer screen. It isn't backlit. There's no eye strain. You can read it in sunlight. It looks almost exactly like paper and , I must say, having seen it, it's bloody impressive. All the other readers on the market are around about the same size as a paperback, and mostly thinner. This is good. This means I can put it in my pocket. With the iPad the screen (albeit an impressive high resolution one) IS backlit. And the device IS too big to fit in a pocket.
And the last bit's what's disappointed me the most. In conjunction with the iPad's launch, Apple have also announced their new iBooks store (like iTunes but for books). Personally I think they could have made more of this and provided something more (e) reader friendly.
So there are my impressions. I'm sure it'll sell well. I'm sure it'll be competition for the Kindle (btw what I'd like to see is the option to buy eBooks from wherever I like and to read them on whichever device I choose) and I'm sure the fact that its 16G memory is the same as my iPod nano won't hinder it.
I think I was just expecting more. Or something different.
Tuesday, January 26, 2010
The Short Story According To Nik
It occurred to me earlier that I don't really give any advice here, so this post should change that. It's not comprehensive. Lots will disagree with me, I'm sure. But this is what I think. I hope it helps. And if anyone's got any of their own I'd love to see them - so do leave a comment.
Here are my tips for anyone wanting to write a good short story or piece of flash fiction.
Start where the story starts, not before. If I was telling you about a fantastic hotel room I'd stayed in I wouldn't start by telling you about booking the tickets to get there (unless the story was about booking the tickets and ended in the room).
Take out everything, every word, every sentence, every character that isn't absolutely necessary.
Similarly, only use the right words. Sometimes people do just 'sit'. Or 'run'.
Make sure your characters are believable. What they do, or the situations they find themselves in, may be unlikely and fantastical but the way they react to them has to be something that readers will believe.
Be suspicious of anything you think is clever. The story comes first, the story's what people should notice, not the writer.
Write for you, but spare a thought for the reader too.
Don't overdo it. Big words are fine if they're the right ones. Same with descriptions.
Say what you want to say in the simplest, and most effective, way possible. In other words: get to the point.
Aim to be brilliant.
Don't expect it to be easy. Or quick. Be prepared to work hard.
Don't be afraid of rewriting. In fact, embrace it; it will make your stories better.
Don't expect to get it right the first time. You have total control of what can be changed. (I often find also that if a story wants or needs to be changed, then it'll let you know.)
Trust your instincts. If you suspect something's not working then it probably isn't.
Don't be afraid of putting a story away for a while. Sometimes stories, and your head, need space.
Don't be afraid of failure. Nothing's wasted. It's better to try something new and fail (and perhaps learn something) than to play safe all the time.
Most importantly: BE BRAVE. You have an imagination, use it. Write the story you want to write, write what you think's good and interesting, even if that means not sticking with the norm. Different, if done well, can be brilliant.
And read the greats. See how they do things. See why they're the greats.
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Talking of greats and of advice...
Monday, January 25, 2010
How I Write
Sunday, January 24, 2010
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Thursday, January 21, 2010
Interview with The Bristol Short Story Prize
Wednesday, January 20, 2010
2081
(I first read the story in his collection, Welcome to The Monkey House - which is brilliant.)
Incidentally, if you google the story's title there's a PDF of the story on the results page just below the video results.
2081 Trailer from 2081 on Vimeo.
Listen
One of the reasons I stopped was because I was worried that the style was not my own. Honestly I thought I'd been too heavily influenced by reading Kurt Vonnegut. And me being me, well - I want what I write to be me, to come from inside.
But yesterday: a revelation.
I was working on an old laptop and I opened a story I'd written AGES ago.
And it was written in exactly the same style as the thing I'd given up on. The first piece had been written a year or so before I'd read a Kurt Vonnegut book. The more recent piece had been written before I'd read a Kurt Vonnegut book too, I discovered. I hadn't nicked his style. It was my own.
You have no idea how happy that makes me. And free.
Now, if I could write something at least half as good as the master...
Tuesday, January 19, 2010
From Rotten Things To The Awesome
This Blog Post Has Probably Been A Long Time Coming
For a fair old while now I've been wondering how best to blog about this. Basically, and to cut a very long story short, there was a writing community. A group of writers who were friends. Who shared their work with each other for feedback. One of those friends, it turned out, was using (abusing) his friendship by stealing the ideas of his friends and passing them off as his own. Much has been said about this. Here, for example. It even spawned an anti-plagiarism day to which many, many people contributed. Including me.
And as I said at the time: theft is wrong and whoever does it should be ashamed. And one of the most important bits about being a writer is the ability to MAKE STUFF UP. Which is different to taking other people's stories. Very different.
The writer in question has defended himself (I've linked to what he's said below). He's said that what he's done is legitimate because he's an artiste (don't you know) and that all art is shared. And to a point, yes it is - every artist learns from who's gone before them and what they've produced. People are influenced. I know I've said a good, good many times how much reading the utterly splendid Aimee Bender and Etgar Keret's work has shaped me as a writer. And Carver. And Mary Miller. And Alice Munro. And Kurt Vonnegut. And Sarah Salway. And Michael Czyzniejewski. And Caroline Smailes. And Roy Kesey. And Sebastian Beaumont and F Scott Fitzgerald. And... okay, you're getting bored. I understand.
The keyword here is: INFLUENCED. Not: I'LL WRITE, I'LL DO THE WORK AND YOU CAN TAKE THE CREDIT (without even telling me!!!).
The whole thing upset me. That a guy, a friend, could do that, upset me (most writers I know are brilliant and lovely and morally sound). A lot. God, that he did it was bad enough. And not apologise. And not admit to what he'd done. Even now he refuses to put a piece of his (which he nicked) up online (it won a comp and was taken down and withdrawn once the comp organisers realised what had happened) so people could see the actual evidence and make their own minds up.
What he has been doing, especially of late, is blogging (and commenting on his own posts and apparently replying to them) about the whole thing. Trying to justify why he did what he did. And trying to suggest that the people who objected (he calls one a 'mad woman' - I call her his former friend who trusted him who he stole work from and who's pissed off about it) are stupid and don't understand the artistic process. He's talking bullshit of course. (All this after he's commented here, on my blog, under a variety of different names, I should say.)
As I said, I've been wondering how best to blog about this for some time.
And then I got this email, which I think sums things up perfectly. And I had to post it now, even though it's late. And no, it's probably not from who you might think it's from . But it IS right.
Stealing's wrong. Stealing from friends is even worse.
(You can read Douglas Bruton's nonsense here.)
It says (the sensible email, that is....):
The creative process, for most of us, has absolutely NOTHING to do with taking whole stories or part-stories from unsuspecting and trusting colleagues in writing groups, and using their creations for our own gain.
For most writers, this is utterly unacceptable behaviour. It is not the taking of legitimate inspiration. It is done behind people's backs, without permission, abusing trust. It is theft. Underhand and mean-spirited, fuelled by both jealousy and greed.
There are NO articles endorsing the taking of work from friends without permission. Unless they are written by Douglas Bruton.
It is deeply cynical that Bruton repeatedly seeks to join groups of unsuspecting writers, without warning them of his weird creative habits. We'd like to suggest that he seeks the company of like-minded writers, who don't mind their hard work being taken by colleagues, without asking, without thanks, without credit.
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So that's all I've got to say on the subject - I'm glad the above emailer said it so well (better than me). I imagine there'll be a can of worms opened up. And I imagine there'll be a few comments here from people (or names, let's be honest!) I'm not familiar with. But it needed saying, this. And it's been said.
Folks, be nice to your friends. Don't steal from them. It's rubbish.
Saturday, January 16, 2010
A Splendid Second Megan Taylor Interview
Friday, January 15, 2010
You Never Quite Know
I think the point I'm struggling to make is: When you're a writer there's no need to rush. Stories keep. And they can be improved, even rescued, long after they've been written.
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And now I need to eat. It has been a long, long week. But a good one, all told.
Thursday, January 14, 2010
Tidying Up
My website now has its own short story page, where a good number of my stories that have been published online can be read. That's meant I've been able to remove a few from the right hand sidebar, so the blog looks a little tidier.
I've also added an interviews page to my website - again meaning I can remove some of the links to the right so the blog doesn't look quite so ragged and straggly. (I did this randomly by the way - so if you're interview's not there, sorry, but it wasn't because I didn't like what you had to say. Actually, that's a very good point - I don't think I've been unhappy with any of my interviews, which says an awful lot about those I've interviewed.)
Err, so there.
I hope you like what I've done - if you don't, let me know!
Tuesday, January 12, 2010
I Like To Write, I Don't Like To Write
Monday, January 11, 2010
Ink
Sunday, January 10, 2010
Two More Questions and Two More Answers
A Couple Of Questions Answered
Saturday, January 09, 2010
What Do You Want From Me?
Thursday, January 07, 2010
Kate Forsyth Interview

Welcome to the blog, Kate. So, to start us off, your new book, The Puzzle Ring – who’s it for and what’s it about?
‘The Puzzle Ring’ is an historical fantasy for children aged 10+. It tells the story of a girl who discovers that her family was cursed long ago, and the only way to break the curse is to find and fix a broken puzzle ring. To do this, she must travel back in time to the last tumultuous days of Mary, Queen of Scots … a time when witches were burnt and queens were betrayed and the dark forces of wild magic still stalked the land … Essentially its a time travel adventure, with lots of fascinating stuff about Scottish history and fairy lore and curses in it. It was huge fun to write!
You spent a month in Scotland, I hear, to research myths and lore – what was that like?
It was one of the most amazing experiences of my life. I’d longed to go to Scotland all of my life, having been brought up on the stories of my grandmother and great-aunts, who had been brought up on the stories of their grandmother, Ellen Mackenzie, who left Scotland in 1840 at the age of 14. Her story is as tragic and romantic as any old family story, and basically the story of Hannah – who finds herself heir to a mysterious old castle in Scotland – grew directly out of that family history.
My husband says I set ‘The Puzzle Ring’ in Scotland just so I could finally go there – and there’s some truth in that. I think its really important for writers to go where they set their books – and so I packed up my whole family (one husband, three kiddies) and took them to Scotland.
Nothing was strange to me. I felt like I was coming home. As we drove around that wild, lonely, beautiful country, I told my children all the stories that I had been told as a child, and found my voice falling into the same soft lilt of my grandmother and great-aunts.
We stayed in a real 14th century castle near Gatehouse of Fleet, a place where John Knox himself had once stayed, then had four nights in a cottage on the shores of Loch Lomond, in the grounds of Arden House, a grand old Scottish baronial mansion which helped me imagine what Wintersloe Castle might have looked like.
We drove to all the places that appear in the book – the fairy mountain Schiehallion; the whirlpool known as the Hag’s Washtub; and the village of Fortingall where a five-thousand-year-old yew tree grows. We travelled over the Rannoch Moor to Glencoe, a place that looks as if it has not changed in a thousand years, and along the sea road to the Isle of Skye, where we occasionally saw the most extraordinary mountain crags looming out of the mist and rain.
Three days staying in an old monastery on the shores of Loch Ness was definitely a highlight of the trip, particularly as the rain cleared and we had some beautiful warm, spring sunshine. We went monster-hunting, and ate some great Scottish cuisine in the local pubs, and then headed to Edinburgh for a few more days.
I loved Edinburgh! I think it’s one of my favourite cities in the world. One of the highlights was the Beltane celebrations on Calton Hill. We listened to a wonderful Scottish storyteller who told us that Calton Hill was once believed to be a gateway to fairyland. This solved a massive problem I had with the plot of ‘The Puzzle Ring’ and so it turned into one of the best nights we had in Scotland (though we still cannot get over all the mad Celts with their bare arms and bare legs in the freezing cold of a Scottish spring evening.)
When I came home to Sydney, I found my fingertips could not fly over the keyboard fast enough. The oral history of my own family, the fairy tales and folklore of my great-aunt’s bookshelves, the Scottish history I had devoured as a child, all wove itself seamlessly into the book, keeping me as enthralled as any of my grandmother’s stories. And of course, I dedicated the novel to Nonnie and my great-aunts, women of the Mackenzie clan, who first told me the grand and tragic stories of Scotland.
You also spent some time researching curses, do you believe in them now?
One of the first triggers for the book was discovering an amazing old hardback called ‘The Book of Curses’ in a second-hand bookshop in Rye, just at the very moment when I was first thinking about ‘The Puzzle Ring’ and wondering about why Hannah must find the broken ring. When I found the book, it fell open at a story about the Seaforth Doom, a very famous Scottish curse laid upon the Mackenzie clan (my own clan!) I was instantly fascinated.
And one of the reasons why I was so fascinated is that when I was 9 years old I laid a curse upon the biggest, meanest girl at school, a bully-girl called Brenda. She used to pin my plaits to the back of my chair, give me Chinese burns, and mock my stammer. One day I told her I’d curse her if she was ever mean to me again, and in response she pinched me and called me a crybaby. So I went home and pricked my fingers and, with my own blood, I wrote her name on a piece of paper, and burnt the paper over a candle, chanting something along the lines of ‘I curse thee, I curse thee, I curse thee.’
The next day she fell down the stairs and broke her leg. I have never doubted the power of curses since.
Did anything surprise you in writing The Puzzle Ring?
It’s impossible to write a novel and not be surprised by the mysterious synchronicities and serendipities of life. Sometimes I surprise myself, what’s in that bog of the imagination. Sometimes it’s being in need, stuck and afraid, and reaching out a hand and finding just what you need, right then. (Finding ‘The Book of Curses’ is a perfect example of this). And sometimes its realising something in the book that seemed to be there the whole time and you just discover it, as if it was always there and you were just too foolish to see it before. It’s one of the reasons I love writing novels so much.
How does The Puzzle Ring compare with your other books?
Interesting question! ‘The Puzzle Ring’ draws upon the same wellspring of ideas as many of my other books – history, in particular Scottish history; fairy lore, in particular Scottish fairy lore; paganism and Wicca; theories of time travel (I’ve written other books that involve trips back in time); a fascination with jewellery, herbs and flowers, food, art, music, animals; a red-haired heroine (why do so many of my heroines have red hair?); an emphasis on the importance of human relationships and connectedness; and of course it has a happy ending.
How is it different? It is set in contemporary times for much of its story, unlike most of my books, and I draw upon my own passion for soul music, something I’ve never done before.
Stylistically, I think it feels the same as my other books. My books are usually thick and intricate and complex, with unexpected twists and turns, and filled with songs and charms and spells and chants, which is I think my natural love for poetry and song finding an outlet.
You write for adults as well as younger people – are the two processes vastly different?
Not at all. I always know when I start a book who my audience is. I believe strongly that each story has its own natural shape, its own structure and rhythm, and knowing who I am writing for is one way I find that shape and rhythm. Chapter length, sentence construction, word choice – all are linked to that shape – and I find it a very natural, intuitive process discovering it. If I ever do start going astray, it helps me to visualise who is reading it – usually myself at a different age, or my own children and nephews and nieces – and then I know if I am growing too dark, too scary, too sexy, too sophisticated. Ideally, I like to write two or three books for children, and then two or three for adults – its a pattern that seems to suit me.
Talking of the writing process, what’s yours?
First, I daydream a story to life. An idea comes to me – for example, I first thought of writing a book about a quest to find and restore a broken puzzle ring after reading an article about the history of puzzle rings (they were first invented by an Arabian king who was so jealous of his young and beautiful wife that he wanted to devise a way to know if she ever took her wedding ring off her finger). This seemed to me a perfect narrative stratagem – someone, somewhere, wanted to fix a puzzle ring that had been broken. I begin to wonder and ask myself questions. Who? Why? Where? I scribble notes, and when I have more than a page of them I start a new notebook. I have quite a few of them for different ideas – more novels than I could ever write.
I usually begin by assembling a cast of characters, and by writing down a list of possible adventures ie objectives to be achieved, obstacles to be overcome, lessons to be learnt. By the time I’m doing plot points, my brain’s on fire with ideas. Just last night I was up at 1pm, scribbling down possible scenes for the book I’m writing now, and didn’t get to sleep till 3am. This, unfortunately, happens a lot.
Then I begin to write. I always like to begin at the point of change, and then I will write my way steadily through the story, from beginning to middle to end. I edit & polis as I go, and often will have a week or two fixing up what I’ve already written before I can move onwards again. Once I have finished my first draft, I edit very cruelly, and rewrite a lot, and solve lots of problems, and then I send it to my agent and editors, ready to begin the next stage of the story emerging from its chrysalis.
Where did it all begin?
I wrote my first poem at 4, my first story at 5, and my first novel at 7. I have never stopped since. I think I was born knowing I was destined to be a writer (or at least, wanting it very badly)
If you weren’t a writer, you’d be...
Very unhappy.
What’s the best piece of writing advice you’ve been given?
Be brave.
What should all writers do?
Read a lot, write a lot, and don’t be afraid to cut. Cruelly.
What advice would you give to someone wanting to be published?
Wait until you have something you are really sure of, really proud of. Be patient. It takes time to learn the craft
What’s next for you?
I’ve just finished a YA heroic fantasy called ‘The Wildkin’s Curse’ which is being published in Australia in May, and I’m now starting its sequel, tentatively called ‘The Sword of the Storm King’. Then I plan to write a historical fantasy for adults called ‘Bitter Greens’, retelling the tale of Rapunzel.
Anything you’d like to add?
Thank you so much for having me!

Kate Forsyth is the internationally bestselling author of numerous books for children and adults, including The Gypsy Crown, The Starthorn Tree, Dragon Gold and Sea-Magic.
The Gypsy Crown is the first in ‘The Chain of Charms’ series, an historical adventure story which follows the perilous adventures of two Romany children in the time of Oliver Cromwell. In 2007, Kate became the first author to win five Aurealis awards in a single year when Books 2-6 in the series were jointly awarded the 2007 Aurealis Award for Children’s Fiction. Book 5: The Lightning Bolt was also named a Notable Book for 2007 by the Children’s Book Council of Australia. Kate lives by the sea in
Wednesday, January 06, 2010
Something Different
Monday, January 04, 2010
Kreativ

Oh now. The very lovely Jo Cooper has nominated me for a Kreativ Blogger Award, which is a lovely way to start the year. Honestly, it does mean a lot that people enjoy my little corner of the internet.
2. Copy the logo and place it on your blog.
3. Link to the person who nominated you for this award.
4. Name 7 things about yourself that people might find interesting.
5. Nominate 7 Kreativ Bloggers.
6. Post links to the 7 blogs you nominate.
7. Leave a comment on each of the blogs letting them know they have been nominated.
Saturday, January 02, 2010
Well, It's Here
And that's about it really. I think I just wanted to say hello.









